• Finish the Reader’s notebook Chart
• Finish reading the packet.
Extra Credit post a comment on this blog, discussing your opinion on the sermon. At least 4 sentences.
Period 3
- Find 5 sentences form the vocabulary blog and correct them. Make sure that you write down the incorrect sentence and the revised sentence.
6 comments:
Yohita Mendez
11/18/08
five sentences
1) I could conjecture that I am going to get a good grade in English.
2) To detract the drama, I had to let some of my "friends" go.
3) When I get mad, I become very intractable and do not want to be bothered.
4) I conjecture to the question was "D".
5) When I get mad , I get intractable and disliked getting bothered when I'm mad.
Yohita,
Are these sentences the corrected ones or the incorrect ones? I would prefer that both the wrong one and the one that you corrected be posted. This way I can see what was the matter with it and what you fixed.
Ms. Ramirez
The sermon seemed to be from someone who is faithful to God and feels very strong about his religion. He was persuasive and leading for people to believe what he does. I felt that he was just on the subject of your consequences of your actions which was a bit boring. The subject that he was on almost turns people away from being his religion because you can make a mistake and be going to hell because of it.
I believe this sermon was written by someone who is very passionate about their religion. I believe that the tone is fearful because he speaks about “Angry God” which I would never use these words together. I also disagree with him when he says that people who are sinful will go to hell. This is because I was taught and I believe in forgiveness.
I think the sermon was crap. He only talked about people going to hell. I dont believe in heaven or hell but if I did i wouldn't want to hear about the negative place where people go. He should have talked about what you should do so you wouldn' go there and then talk about heaven and all that other stuff.
anna rowell
period 1
I think John Edwards was a very religous man but "Sinners in the hands of an Angry God" was basically saying that the people running the religous congregatioins were hypocrites. He was saying that the leaders would talk about how your supposed to do good to all the christians and yet the leaders would go home go home and sin thinking that just because there leaders running everything that it automatically gives them access in heaven. I kinda agree with this but at the same time I don't because if John Edwards was such a religous man he would know that in the bible it said that no man is without sin. wich means everybody sins.
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